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Never that strong
When the weight of life bears down upon my back,
my thoughts sometimes seem to get a bit off track,
and crawl away to the mud holes of slippery despair,
terrified of missing out on grand desires so rare,
forfeit the eternal struggle for hope, in the cold,
never giving up is the only way, or so we are told,
optimistic fairy tales, damning logic to hollow, fleeting warm,
and trepidation from paranoia begins to swarm,
legs bend and snap under the unbearable load,
no longer able to traverse this rotting road,
They say " keep up the faith, and you can survive"
"hold your loved ones close, and have dreams to strive"
"if you truly believe, there can be no wrong"
forgive me, friends, for I was never that strong.
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/18/2009 |
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- Title: Never that strong
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Something bleak and despairing
- Date: 01/18/2009
- Tags: never strong
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Comments (5 Comments)
- x__C r e a m - C h i - 01/21/2009
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I like it a lot. wonderful and you put heart and thought into this piece! - Report As Spam
- codmaster78 - 01/20/2009
- dude this poem told me to wake up in the morning or end up like this guy. no offenise. hay your still and awesome writer
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- Bleuraven123 - 01/19/2009
- Wow, Alitare! This is...this is just... wow!! eek I love it! whee
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- vice_cereal - 01/19/2009
- best poem i read all day. it was deep without being cheesy and stupid and gooey like all the other poems.keep up da good work
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- Miellee - 01/18/2009
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There are no words to describe the beauty of this poem
it touchs my soul and brings me back to times where I wasn't strong enough
yet the beauty of it cannot be denied - Report As Spam