how long is 4 ever

• Artist: xx_emolicious-barbie_xx
• Description: forever seems so short now days
• Date: 02/18/2009
• Tags: forever

you say you'll love me forever

but how long will that be

say you love me when the sun sets

when the moring comes forever suddenly ends

forever how long may that be

ive seen forever turn right into memories

so tell me

do u mean forever 2 you or forever 2 me

forever will be over

in the blink of an eye

no tears will fall

ill never cry

im used 2 forever meaning goodbye

Comments

[starryluminara]

Nice poem but i agree with edible flower, spell things correctly and dont use text talk.

[E d i b l e F l o w e r]

Any value your poem might have is trashed as soon as you use txt tlk. Also, grammar is your friend, and it's desperately trying to get your attention. Desperately.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I need to start writing philosophical rant poems. 2/5.

[tksunshine93]

The last line really got me. Well done!