Pride..Have some...

• Artist: oni ninja Bob
• Description: I just thought of it after my long disappointing day.
  
  >.> Don't Hate me.
• Date: 05/17/2009
• Tags: pridehave some

This feels weird,
Cold voices and places pail,
They gather to speak their voice, judgmental,
They stand above, looking down,
Such pride remains unbroken, such words remain unspoken,
Our tears fall to the ground,
Stand your ground this is what we are fighting for,
Shall I call on you to help prevail or will you say,
Fail mother ******** I want you dead,
Will you stand a complete stranger,
Can I call you to help me fulfill our dreams,
On this day our spirits will not fall,
On this day we praise all who have fallen,
On this day we will rise from our chains,
Stand your ground this is what we are fighting for,
Praise the fallen ones...

Comments

[HikariDemonNinja]

........wow......this is very good.........no lie

[Guilmon-213]

It was good, Iloved it
you should become a poet cause your good at it

[Caesura Caelum]

Hate you? Nah, that was great! I really do like this one a lot. 5/5

[Assassin Hatsume]

I think it's awesome! Besides having good words in the right place, it has extremely good meaning and depth into it! =0

[Moon Over the Hill]

I like ur poem, It's almost what I feel these days...