Lost Path

• Artist: Sarah Kaye
• Description: a poem i wrote with a picture... >.<
• Date: 11/28/2009
• Tags: lost path

Lost words
down a
winding path
of forgotten
memories
Find its way
to the next world
About a story
of a young girl
who was lost
untill one day
He came...

Comments

[MyMindIsAWeapon]

this is really awesome, the flow and the verbals... i mean i hope to god i don't sounds like a teacher... but you are really good...

[xElizabethxAshleighx]

I really like this. I gave it a 4/5
I like how it's inspirational.
Like finding a personal sun.
Here's a critique:
try to add more detail,
draw the reader in more.

[Kitten254]

sounds like me...sorry to tell you but...even the greatest of moments have a tragic ending