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Falling and being picked up I was once falling in darkness,it was all bleak and there seem to be no way out.I awoke to see a light shining in the black.The light gave me a way out of the darkness,I followed it,in the dark it seemed to burn like piler of fire and the also seemed to be like a friend too.Then when I was out of the dark I was bathed in light,I herd a voice that was like a fathers'.The father said "welcome my lost boy you are saved from the darkness and now you are found".I rushed toward him crying and said,"how can you love me?I did so many bad things?".Then the father said,"I love you because I nitted you mothers' whom and I gave the choice to come to me and you came back to me,all of the things you did will be washed away and you'll become my son".

Posted by: Crown_Clown926 Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 09:47pm

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Commented on: Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 09:49pm


	This poem is for my heavenly father who cares about me more than any person on earth and it also for people who want to read this poem.

Commented on: Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 10:13pm


	omg how do your so many good poems,you are so lucky god gave you a gift to write so many good poems and he also gave you the gift to save people from the darkness,and i thank you for your help you have been more than kind to me,you have been like a big guardian ^^

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Commented on: Sun Dec 16, 2007 @ 01:19am


	The words "falling in darkness" reminded me of Skillet's song "Falling in the Black." I can't really understand the words in that song, but still... Cool poem... especially with the scriptural references: the prodigal son, the verse in psalms

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