Today I decided to write a story. Let me know what you think of it.
One Day In Konoha...
So I was surfing the web when I came upon a link that warped me to Konoha village. My clothes had changed to a ragged cape, a pair of baggy black pants, a black muscle shirt and a headband. It was steel plated and had an A on it instead of the Konoha leaf symbol or any others. I also had a HUGE sword, similar to Zabuza's but it looked different. So I walked into the village. For some reason, I was now really hungry even though I had eaten lunch just a few minutes ago. I looked for a place to eat.
I found the ramen shop after wandering for a while. I sat down and had some beef ramen. When I had to pay, I reached into my pocket to find that my wallet was gone! so I bargained with the ramen shop owner and he said he would let me pay when I had the money. That's when Naruto walked into the shop. He had some ramen and we got to talking. Turns out he was on a mission, and needed someone to go with him. I offered, since I REALLY needed some money. "So what is the mission?" I said.
"The mission is to help Hinata with her training. Her father requested that I do the mission for some reason... and it seems strange to go alone."
So me and Naruto began walking towards the Hyuuga mansion when Kiba and Akamaru suddenly block the path. Akamaru was barking at me, which could only mean one thing... I was suspected of doing something. "Naruto," Kiba began. "That person is suspected of stealing doccuments from the Fifth's office." Great, I thought, of all the things I could have been suspected of, it just had to be this.
After being interrogated and searched, I was let off the hook. Naruto was also assigned to watching me while I was in the village. By now it was late in the afternoon and Naruto and I hurried to the Hyuuga mansion. what I saw when I entered the mansion left me in surprise and in despair. The "Mission" was nothing more than a surprise party for Naruto. So for a while I sat sulking in one of the corners of the courtyard. After a while Hinata came over and asked what was wrong. I explained that I needed money for the ramen I ate when I first arrived. She then pulled out a pouch of money and gave me the amount due for the ramen. "Thank you," I said, "I won't forget your kindness anytime soon."
I dashed to the ramen shop and paid up. Then I suddenly felt very tired. I just passed out right there in the street. When I woke up, I was back in front of my computer, with a note from Hinata saying, "Come visit again sometime". Well that was one heck of a day.
THE END
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The little things and how they matter...
this is where you'll probably find the nonsense from the guy with his head in the clouds...
The sword I wield is not one of steel... it is forged from guts and courage, polished with honor, valor, and bravery, and sharpened with wit and knowledge.
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