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twas the few weeks before christmas and nothing 2 do and yet upon the the distance Dave saw a truck It was a wreck and bad. So he thought the person was mean but guess wat he gave him? The best present ever a coca-cola!
Happy New Years from Lord the bubba
- by isaiah_reyes |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: coca-cola
- Artist: isaiah_reyes
- Description: weird
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: funny
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Amras Tasatir - 05/25/2011
- Creative, but it all runs together, and there's no flow. Try using more punctuation. Also, write like it's for an English class. It makes your works appear more credible.
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- vampiricwolf13 - 11/21/2009
- sorry to say, but i didnt really like it, however, you are a good writer, so i at least will give you a three
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- DiffusedShadows - 07/07/2009
- 5/5
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- mooncloud_angel - 06/25/2009
- I LOVE IT biggrin
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- saucyBOYgal - 06/02/2009
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O.o
omg, you're insane. i like it. - Report As Spam
- Plump ozzyboy - 12/31/2008
- it sucked
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- evamazing - 12/29/2008
- hahaha luv itt 10/5 smile
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