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• Artist: EmoCo0kies
• Description: THis is my "fanfiction" YOu could say thats what it is but its NOTHING like twilight there are some thing like it but alot different.
  Similarities
  1.Drink animal blood.
  2. "Family"
  3."Royal Vampires"
  5. Alone
  
  I know there is five but its different dont like it dont read.
  
  All the similarities belong to Stephanie Meyer.
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: iwalktoyetanothe

I walk to yet another boring class. An eternity of this may get to you. Well to start it off my name is Suzzane Willings and I'm stuck in a 17 year old's body. Like everyday before school i jut went hunting! Whoo? I ate DUN DUN DUN Deer Blood... Its pretty dull... I wish they hadnt banned human blood.



~Should I write more to it?

Comments

[x-VeXo-x]

lalu

[Kao_705_hearts]

hmmm it sounds alot like twilight you should right more if you say their is a diffrence

[No Life Queen - Missy B]

It needs a lot of work. You should have made it longer, and put more thought into it. But if you worked on it a bit more, if just might turn into a really good story.
I'm not being mean, I'm just being a critic.

[crystalsight555]

its ok, but it needs some work and mabye a little more thought. but dont be discouraged, WRITE ON!!!

[xunholyxsaintx]

after an idea has been used
going back to it makes it just feel like a memory
and memories arent as vivid and amazing as the present
try to add you're own things into the story more
when you write you create you're own world
so do that.
make your own world
in every way possible
smile