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... I want someone to sweep me off my feet, hug me and n e v e r let me go, kiss me sweetly everytime we meet, whisper in my ear "I l o v e you." Dance with me in the moonlight under the stars on the grass with wet, seeping dew squishing between our toes, look deeply into my eyes and find my way into my bounded soul, stare deeply into each other eyes and savour the moment we have together, to let go of my hand and let me go and let me be free, to never let me run out of their minds,to tell me things will go okay when all seems to be hopeless, to remember me when i leave, to take me back with all the forgivness in my heart..
and for someone to let go everything they've ever wanted just to be with.
Me.
And to l o v e me, unconditionly for forever and always.
Eternity.
But things like this, n e v e r happen, only in fairytales.
Un-real, un-true fairytales.
Made up from one's mind and i m a g i n a t i o n.
Written with l o v e and passion.
But all words and emotions put into this simple story soon is crushed and turned into tiny pieces of saddness because that person who has wished and wished apon a star for this o n e amazing thing to happen to them is soon crying along with the wolf on a star-filled night with the vivid, white moon.
- by -Miiss Funky- |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/21/2009 |
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- Title: Just a Fairytale.
- Artist: -Miiss Funky-
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Description:
This is a small thing I made, i'm not sure to classify it as a Poem or Fiction story.
So I put it in here :] .
Just remember, I did make this up from my mind && i didn't copy this from anyone whatsoever :]
Please try and make the comments not too harsh but please add honesty into them!
Thank you && please rate :] - Date: 04/21/2009
- Tags: just fairytale miissfunky heartbroken tear
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Comments (7 Comments)
- hadezs7 - 07/06/2009
- its good
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- mai xia - 07/05/2009
- its every good but its every sad sad
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- loversnirvana - 07/01/2009
- i like this poem
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- Fipll - 06/24/2009
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I hate to be the party pooper, but it didn't appeal to me. It reminded me of one of those little myspace things that are all cutesy that say stuff like:
When I saw you I was afraid to meet you, when I met you I was afraid to like you, when I liked you I was afraid to kiss you, when I kissed you I was afraid to love you but now that I love you..
I'm Afraid To Lose You!!
Sorry, but it just felt like a bad card to me. - Report As Spam
- OrangeCaramelApplePie712 - 06/16/2009
- I like it I believe we all can relate to the need to have a love like this but the only way to have it is by that love yourself don't ask for it be it.
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- Nami Kiasu - 05/31/2009
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...... my mind is full of those fairytales....... only some fairytales come true, but i know mine won't.
and great poem. if you put it into stanzas, it'll offical be a poem.
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- iiSammyy - 05/27/2009
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awesomee poem. =D
i know its a secret but who is the special someone? lol. - Report As Spam