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... I want someone to sweep me off my feet, hug me and n e v e r let me go, kiss me sweetly everytime we meet, whisper in my ear "I l o v e you." Dance with me in the moonlight under the stars on the grass with wet, seeping dew squishing between our toes, look deeply into my eyes and find my way into my bounded soul, stare deeply into each other eyes and savour the moment we have together, to let go of my hand and let me go and let me be free, to never let me run out of their minds,to tell me things will go okay when all seems to be hopeless, to remember me when i leave, to take me back with all the forgivness in my heart..
and for someone to let go everything they've ever wanted just to be with.
Me.
And to l o v e me, unconditionly for forever and always.
Eternity.
But things like this, n e v e r happen, only in fairytales.
Un-real, un-true fairytales.
Made up from one's mind and i m a g i n a t i o n.
Written with l o v e and passion.
But all words and emotions put into this simple story soon is crushed and turned into tiny pieces of saddness because that person who has wished and wished apon a star for this o n e amazing thing to happen to them is soon crying along with the wolf on a star-filled night with the vivid, white moon.
- by -Miiss Funky- |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/21/2009 |
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- Title: Just a Fairytale.
- Artist: -Miiss Funky-
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Description:
This is a small thing I made, i'm not sure to classify it as a Poem or Fiction story.
So I put it in here :] .
Just remember, I did make this up from my mind && i didn't copy this from anyone whatsoever :]
Please try and make the comments not too harsh but please add honesty into them!
Thank you && please rate :] - Date: 04/21/2009
- Tags: just fairytale miissfunky heartbroken tear
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iBrightScales - 09/12/2009
- This is good, but it is more prose than poetry.
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- FoxfireAsaliEcara - 08/08/2009
- Lovely poem/story. I like it, but you should know that sometimes even the most impossible fairytails do come true. It just takes patience and faith.
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- Razzz25 - 08/06/2009
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I like it.
You have a sort of E.E. Cummings thing going on.
Nicely done.
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- Rusted Over Wet Dreams - 08/03/2009
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preeety good my dear lol P:
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- chcameeca - 08/01/2009
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really good
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- shadowkid432 - 07/22/2009
- i've been in this faieytale only but once. it took a long time to get there. but when you do meet the person of your dreams you'll know,because you'll be happy. the poem is very heart warming though i have to thing of better times at the end. i never did die happy.i just died
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- Lucas kessler Davis - 07/19/2009
- it toched meand im not a soft person to get to you throwd it down thas wat up
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