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The little things and how they matter...
this is where you'll probably find the nonsense from the guy with his head in the clouds...
New Story!
Well, after trying to come up with a story for my game, I came upon a road block since I haven't been too creative in these months. So, I decided I'd try to come up with a story to bring out my most creative ideas. Here goes! biggrin

"Guns of Fate"

Many years ago, mankind was forced to leave the Earth because of how badly damaged it had become from all of the war. Only two-fifths of the Earth's population survived after World War 4, which took place in 2235. Those who had survived took off into space to find a new home-world. After a century of drifting through space, they found a new planet, and named it "Terra". More time passed, and the human race began to thrive in their new environment. They had even befriended many other beings that were similar to them and lived in harmony with them. One such race, who were dubbed "Terrans" by the humans, greatly resembled humans, with a few differences such as their long ears, golden eyes and cat - like tails.
Unfortunately, not all was at peace. There were many who did not like how things were going. So a small group 4 of human researchers broke off from the rest and began to conduct experiments with Terra's natural resources and some of those that had been taken from Earth. They found that by combining iron and spirit stone, an ore that was rare on Terra, that they could create a weapon of such power that it could level mountains with ease. The weapon was dubbed "Ragnarok" because it's power could mean the end of the world. Frightened at their discovery, they built a large safe underground to seal off both the Ragnarok and their discovery. They then hid the four emblems that would unlock it within guns that one of them had crafted from Mythril, an ore that was common on Terra. The guns themselves had powers since the mythril had also had a reaction to the iron ore. They were the Howling Moon Revolver, the Death Gaze Rifle, the Meteor burst Shotgun and the Sunburst Magnum. Each one of the researchers went their separate ways and made sure to tell nobody of the vault.
Another century passed after that. A young man was looking through his family's attic when he came across the Howling Moon Revolver and an old journal. A great adventure was about to begin...






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Martica_TheDevil
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commentCommented on: Mon May 26, 2008 @ 09:37pm
My only comments would be terrans should be a half breed. Half breeds are always interesting.

Give the guns some interesting names. What you've named them is very boring.

Put the story in first person.

Please retell the opening in first person.

My last comment would be put the first chapter up soon because I don't have a good read on the story so far.

I do like your ideas and I do think it will be a very interesting story. Pm me when you put the next entry in. Also if I'm going to take time out of my busy day to read your journal you better be reading mine, got it pal?


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